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Friday, June 12, 2020
my infomation report wirting
this week we have been doing a infomation report and it was about a cheetah or your own pet and i did one about a cheetah and this is it.
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Hello Oakley this is Lewis here and I think you have done an amazing blog post. I think it has heaps of information. You told me all I need to know about cheetahs. Next time you could make it a bit bigger tho because it is quite hard to read. Bye.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the interesting facts Oakley.I'm glad that you included the fact about the non retractable claws.I think they are the only member of the cat family that have claws like this.
ReplyDeleteNext time you might like to check to make sure you have enough full stops and capital letters.
Thanks for sharing your blog with us.
thanks for the infomation about the full stops and capital letters
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