Hope you enjoyed it!have you ever written a narrative?
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Friday, June 5, 2020
narritive writing
Gidday everyone. This week we have been doing narrative writing and for some reason I lost all my writing and I had to restart. I wrote all of this today. The picture was to help us with our ideas.
Hope you enjoyed it!
Hope you enjoyed it!
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Oakley
ReplyDeleteI like what you have pot into this but next time you need to pot foll stops in and Catullus letter's
thanks riley for the infomation riley
DeleteHello Oakley.
ReplyDeleteIt was quite hard to read your story as there is a lot of punctuation missing.Maybe you could re-check and add what's missing.
I think the witch might need to upgrade her broomstick.Maybe she could trade it in for a vacuum cleaner.