hi guys today we have ben making a cartoon this is my cartoon
One day I was scuba diving in the ocean I saw a shark.
The shark was coming towards me and he almost ate me.
I got on an island and I tried to call my mum but it did not work because I had no service.
It was a good thing that I brang a fishing rod and I could catch fish.
Hello Oakley.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed looking at your pictures and read your story by doing so.
I thought you had a good imagination to say you didn't have cell phone coverage while being on an island, as this does happen in real life.
Have you been fishing for real before?
thank you mrs cassidy and i have not been fishing befor and have you ever done a cartoon?
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ReplyDeleteHi Oakley,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your amazing story. I like how there was a shark and you scrmeared. what was your favorite part of your story?
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DeleteI like the same bit that you like Angel
DeleteHello Oakley, its me Manoj your blogger buddy.
ReplyDeleteI think your work is awesome because you did a really good story line. I have learnt this type of animation before. maybe you could work on your punctuation like you wrote ben instead of been in the start. When are you going post another animation?
my secend one is coming.
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