One day I was going to my friends house I picked him up we started to go to the beach I was sad because I saw a sign that said the beach was closed because of tsunamis but we took no notice of the sign and I dove right pass it and we got to the beach then we saw a senmarines we heard the sirens for the Tsunamis. Me and my friend ran to where we parked and the carpark was blocked off and we could not get out and we did not have a happy life after all .
Thursday, March 12, 2020
word count part 2
This week we had to do anther 100 word count story, and it had to have this sentence in it "we took no notice of the sign". I wrote about me and my friend going to the beach. Hope you like it.
One day I was going to my friends house I picked him up we started to go to the beach I was sad because I saw a sign that said the beach was closed because of tsunamis but we took no notice of the sign and I dove right pass it and we got to the beach then we saw a senmarines we heard the sirens for the Tsunamis. Me and my friend ran to where we parked and the carpark was blocked off and we could not get out and we did not have a happy life after all .
One day I was going to my friends house I picked him up we started to go to the beach I was sad because I saw a sign that said the beach was closed because of tsunamis but we took no notice of the sign and I dove right pass it and we got to the beach then we saw a senmarines we heard the sirens for the Tsunamis. Me and my friend ran to where we parked and the carpark was blocked off and we could not get out and we did not have a happy life after all .
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Hello Oakley.
ReplyDeleteWell done on writing a story that holds only 100 words.I counted them all.Maybe next time just remember to add full stops and capital letters. It will make your work easier to read.
I used to love going to the beach when we used to go and visit my nana at Kaka Point.
I see you've used the word tsunami,what happens when there is a tsunami?.I look forward to your reply.