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Friday, August 23, 2019

music story starter

This is a story I wrote after I watched the music video So good to me.I chose this video because it is cool I hope you enjoy my story.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Oakley. I thought it was a neat video too. You included some good detail when you were writing about the game. Remember next time you write to use capital letters for names.

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  2. Hi Oakley it's Leo. I like the way you added the counting.Why did you choose this song.

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