This is a story I wrote after I watched the music video So good to me.I chose this video because it is cool I hope you enjoy my story.
I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, August 23, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Oakley. I thought it was a neat video too. You included some good detail when you were writing about the game. Remember next time you write to use capital letters for names.
ReplyDeleteHi Oakley it's Leo. I like the way you added the counting.Why did you choose this song.
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