Hello bloggers, today I m going to be telling you about my 100 word count. Every week all of my class gets a 100 word count prompt or a picture. 100 word counts are the easiest bit of work all day. I do one every week because I don't wanna be behind on work. My story is about my dad dying in World War 2.
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Hello Oakley, It's me Love. I like how you talked about your 100 Word Count. Maybe next time you could check your spelling. Did you check if your story is 100 words?
ReplyDeleteHi that is a really good story but maybe you should check the spelling but it sounds really good bye.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story Oakley.
ReplyDeleteIt made me feel sad for you and your mum.I liked the end part about you playing soccer.
Maybe next time you could re-read your work to make sure that punctuation is in the correct place.