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Friday, October 23, 2020

hoilday

 on the hoilday i went to go and see my grandad and grandmum and had  mcdonalds for dinner and i had a double cheese burger with no bun and a drink of coke then i played a lot of rocket league and got a lot of wins.  

1 comment:

  1. Thank you Oakley for sharing your holiday with us.Just remember to use punctuation in your work.It makes it easier to read and will also help your work look neater.
    Do your nana and grandad live in Christchurch?.

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