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Friday, August 7, 2020

winter sport

on Friday last week we did winter sport for the second time and i got a goal and so did my friend Riley we VS SHS phoenix and we won 2-1 and i played awesomely. i got the ball off of all of there players and then passed to someone because i was crounded by people so i passed and james passed to me and i ran down the whole feld heres a picture.  

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 7, 2020 at 12:05 PM

    Hi Oakley,
    It's Me Tory. I like your blog post about Winter Sports. Maybe Next time you could add capital letters in your writing and title? Congratulation that you won the game

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  2. AnonymousAugust 7, 2020 at 12:31 PM

    Hi okley it Riley I like how mach you have done you have adid so mack into your work but mabe you coled do a captal letter at the front of the sentens.

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  3. Dee BarkerAugust 8, 2020 at 10:33 AM

    Nice Oakley, I enjoyed hearing you tell me all about it and how you got a goal!

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    1. AnonymousNovember 6, 2020 at 12:26 PM

      thanks mum for the comment and um Riley passed the ball to me and then I ran up most of the field and shot and got passed the goal keeper.

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