this week in topic we have been working on a modle this is my modle
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, June 21, 2019
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Oakley.I was very pleased with the way you made your model. I liked the way you gave it a big open mouth, to make it look like the shark that it resembles. Maybe next time, you could take a photo of it face on,so people can easily recognise that it is a basking shark.Well done on a great model.
ReplyDeletethank you mrs cassidy for the awesome comment
DeleteHi Oakley.I was intrested with your model.
ReplyDeleteI like how you chose a picture.
Next time you can make/your model look even better.
thanks Leon
ReplyDeleteHello Oakley! It so big! Next time you put it in carfully
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