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Friday, May 31, 2019

diving


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  1. Hello Oakley.You have a great imagination.I like how you have used ideas that would probably happen if this was a true story.For example.You wrote that you slowed down when you looked behind you.I could imagine this would be a fact.i am glad you saved the fish.I'm sorry to read that your camera wasn't so lucky.
    If you had the chance,do you think you would go swimming with sharks?I know Miss Clifford from room 8 has.Keep up the great ideas.

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