I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, May 31, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Oakley.You have a great imagination.I like how you have used ideas that would probably happen if this was a true story.For example.You wrote that you slowed down when you looked behind you.I could imagine this would be a fact.i am glad you saved the fish.I'm sorry to read that your camera wasn't so lucky.
ReplyDeleteIf you had the chance,do you think you would go swimming with sharks?I know Miss Clifford from room 8 has.Keep up the great ideas.